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miércoles, 5 de octubre de 2011
160 characters story contest
Here's the post for the SMS contest. You know: you have to write a (very) short story using no more than 160 characters - including blank spaces; abbreviations, such as CU (for see you) or emoticons :) if they are easy to interpret. You can post your mini-tales to the comments row - remember: anonymous messages will be discarded. The deadline will be set Friday 14th October at midnight. A group of teachers will vote for the best stories.
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Hello I live in a small town with my family.I have got a brother.His name is Pablo.I love play football with my friends on weekend.I play tennis.I love my city.
ResponderEliminarHello! I'm going to comment my hobbies.My hobbie favorite is the painting.I like listen to music and play football.At the weekend,I visit my gandsparents and my friends.
ResponderEliminar"When he woke up, the dinosaur was still there." 46 characters, the shortest tale ever, by Augusto Moterroso.
ResponderEliminarOriginal: "Cuando despertó, el dinosaurio aún seguía allí."
Está bien así profe?¿
ResponderEliminarSi tiene menos de 160 y se entiende vale, pero, piensa que es un concurso y lo que se pide es un relato, una narración, un cuento, muy corto, pero cuento al fin y al cabo. Podéis presentar los mini-relatos que queráis cada uno .
ResponderEliminarHello!! I´m Elena López I´m going to describe SET 2. In the picture 1 my teacher is behind of branches of bamboo and he has got a jacket, because it makes cold. In the picture 2 my teacher hasn´t got a jacket and he´s behind a campig. He´s smoking.
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ResponderEliminarElena, me parece que has escrito el mismo comentario dos veces: aquí y en "Compare & contrast" :)
ResponderEliminarDo persons change with the time? Or it is the time the one that shows us since we are really...?
ResponderEliminarNice and deep thought, Fátima :) I would just change the end in the second questio to "...shows u who we really are?" Thank you very much!
ResponderEliminarOnce upon a time, a child who lived in prehistoric.One day taking a walk and suddenly found a dinosaur,he escared the dinosaur he explain that he was harmless and they became friends
ResponderEliminarprofe esta bien asii ???
ResponderEliminar¿Profesor entonces lo cambio o lo dejo así ya?
ResponderEliminarMuy chula, Luis, es la primera que se parece algo a un cuento ;). No, Fátima, no hace falta que la corrijas, está bien así :)
ResponderEliminarHis body and his form was changing.
ResponderEliminarSuddenly it happened of being an ugly and wrinkled worm to being a nice and spectacular butterfly. The rest of the insects would respect it:).
ola!! Profe está bien el cuento????
ResponderEliminarProfesor por qué cuando publicas el cuento sale en español si lo escribimos en ingles:)
A child is a house of chocolate. The house was enchanted and the child transforms in a monster, remains in the house enclosed and later his sister comes and saves it
ResponderEliminarA child was walking when it sees a magic apple. He eats the apple and becomes invisible. The child scared very much. Finally everything was an evil dream.
ResponderEliminarA sow had eight pigs that spent the day playing,the problem arose when eating:the sow had six teat.Then its owner bought a baby's bottle & the problem was solved.
ResponderEliminarProfe,¿cómo lo ve?
ResponderEliminarMuy buenos los cuatro cuentos Irene, Marina (x2) y Sheila!! ¿Seguro que los habéis hecho vosotras solas? ;). Están muy bien, gracias por participar.
ResponderEliminarA mí me salen vuestras historias en inglés. Será que vosotras tenéis activada la traducción automática en vuestro navegador: decidles a vuestros padres que la quiten.
"When he woke up, the elephant was hungry."
ResponderEliminar"He looked at the mountain behind, and there it was."
ResponderEliminarElena, your last one is great... it might seem too obvious, but one could imagine one thousand different stories both before and after your sentence. Good one!
ResponderEliminarA princess pretty & very happy lives in a castle where all was very beautiful.Until one day all changed.The princess had it all planned & she managed well...
ResponderEliminar¿Profe,mi cuento está bien?
ResponderEliminar"The worm ran and ran all the way home, but then I hear the same noise as before ..."
ResponderEliminar"The worm ran and ran all the way home, but then heard the same noise before ..."
ResponderEliminarProfesor el primer comentario no es esque me he equivocado,es el de las 20:13.¿Vale?
ResponderEliminarA little boy walked around park and watch a big castle.The castle is magic and speaks inglish.
ResponderEliminarPerdona, Mª Jesús, con tanto comentario se me pasó comentar tu cuento de los cerditos: está fenomenal (el único fallo que veo - y es pequeño - es que creo que la palabra que quieres usar es "tit", no "teat" :)
ResponderEliminarTu cuento, Andrea, no lo entiendo muy bien al acabar en puntos suspensivos; un par de cosillas: mira a ver dónde colocas los adjetivos (pretty & very happy) y, mejor, utiliza el pasado. Por lo demás, estupendo... y nos contarás qué significa ese final tan abierto :)
El tuyo, Nerea, muy chulo; como el que escribió antes Elena, deja mucho a la imaginación del lector, pero es muy coherente. Estupendo :)
Carlos, mejor este que le primero que enviaste: sólo un par de fallos, a ver si los encuentras tú. Primero, los verbos: elige un sólo tiempo para todos; el segundo "inglish" ¿eso qué es? :D
Hello! I´m going to describe me. I´m tall and thin. My hair is black and curly. My eyes are brown. I like wearing jeans or shorts and t-shirts. I love music.
ResponderEliminarThank you, Cristina. Great one for a description, but maybe you should try again telling us a story. No mistakes at all: congratulations!
ResponderEliminarTitle the gosh in the castle
ResponderEliminarJonh lives in a cstle. Every years he listens a very extrange noise in halloween evening.He thinks in his bedroom there is a gosh.This night he investiges.
Do you like my history?
ResponderEliminarYes, I do... What about a second message to round up the end of your story (not history)?
ResponderEliminarFrancisco :Jose in Barcelona
ResponderEliminarjose in the summer holidays go to Barcelona and visit every town.He look the Camp No,Plaza de las palomas...and he play football with F.C. Barcelona!
A long time ago, a family live in Scotland. Their name has Tom´s father, Jackie´s mother and her soon Andy. They have a dog, It is the best dog in Scotland because he winner more racing but it is very old compete in a race.
ResponderEliminarNo sé si tiene 160 caracteres me parece que me he pasado un poquito, y alomejor no esta bien escrita del todo:$
A woman so so fat that she fell out of bed on both sides.
ResponderEliminarI had a very samll wrist. So small that did not exist.
ResponderEliminarUff, ¡¡qué montón de historias!! Gracias por participar, chicos :)
ResponderEliminarFrancisco: You're a real Barça supporter! Just go over your text and try to find all the missing "s".
Pablo: your tale is a little bit longer than 160, but I'm sure you'll be able to cut it down. And try to look for mistakes. Here's some clues: past tense, better than present; winner≠ win; racing≠races; very old TO compete ;)
Natalia! Great joke! That IS fat! Good!
María, right to the point and a little scary micro tale. Good one! Thank you.