tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post7879993891525552431..comments2023-06-17T16:41:06.299+02:00Comments on Alumnos IES Fernando III: 160 characters story contestPacohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04186844020274773616noreply@blogger.comBlogger41125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-45467341955814368012011-10-13T22:34:25.911+02:002011-10-13T22:34:25.911+02:00Uff, ¡¡qué montón de historias!! Gracias por parti...Uff, ¡¡qué montón de historias!! Gracias por participar, chicos :)<br />Francisco: You're a real Barça supporter! Just go over your text and try to find all the missing "s".<br />Pablo: your tale is a little bit longer than 160, but I'm sure you'll be able to cut it down. And try to look for mistakes. Here's some clues: past tense, better than present; winner≠ win; racing≠races; very old TO compete ;)<br />Natalia! Great joke! That IS fat! Good!<br />María, right to the point and a little scary micro tale. Good one! Thank you.Paco Gascónhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11161740958780459985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-64386727276859186742011-10-13T21:16:44.692+02:002011-10-13T21:16:44.692+02:00I had a very samll wrist. So small that did not ex...I had a very samll wrist. So small that did not exist.Maria Leonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-16993708449707525422011-10-13T21:09:49.098+02:002011-10-13T21:09:49.098+02:00A woman so so fat that she fell out of bed on both...A woman so so fat that she fell out of bed on both sides.Natalia Valderasnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-57353240740032272752011-10-13T21:05:08.304+02:002011-10-13T21:05:08.304+02:00A long time ago, a family live in Scotland. Their ...A long time ago, a family live in Scotland. Their name has Tom´s father, Jackie´s mother and her soon Andy. They have a dog, It is the best dog in Scotland because he winner more racing but it is very old compete in a race. <br />No sé si tiene 160 caracteres me parece que me he pasado un poquito, y alomejor no esta bien escrita del todo:$Pablo Lázaronoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-52067988608667589082011-10-13T20:39:40.476+02:002011-10-13T20:39:40.476+02:00Francisco :Jose in Barcelona
jose in the summer...Francisco :Jose in Barcelona <br /> jose in the summer holidays go to Barcelona and visit every town.He look the Camp No,Plaza de las palomas...and he play football with F.C. Barcelona!francisconoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-28158618536385644832011-10-13T18:16:56.313+02:002011-10-13T18:16:56.313+02:00Yes, I do... What about a second message to round ...Yes, I do... What about a second message to round up the end of your story (not history)?Paco Gascónhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11161740958780459985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-58397788596091559742011-10-13T18:06:33.828+02:002011-10-13T18:06:33.828+02:00Do you like my history?Do you like my history?adrian arjonilaaaaaaaaaanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-32067145012452474472011-10-13T18:04:51.228+02:002011-10-13T18:04:51.228+02:00Title the gosh in the castle
Jonh lives in a cstle...Title the gosh in the castle<br />Jonh lives in a cstle. Every years he listens a very extrange noise in halloween evening.He thinks in his bedroom there is a gosh.This night he investiges.adrian arjonilaaaaaaaaaanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-76209414586494858702011-10-12T23:03:12.448+02:002011-10-12T23:03:12.448+02:00Thank you, Cristina. Great one for a description, ...Thank you, Cristina. Great one for a description, but maybe you should try again telling us a story. No mistakes at all: congratulations!Paco Gascónhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11161740958780459985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-68866926349306534322011-10-12T15:10:32.346+02:002011-10-12T15:10:32.346+02:00Hello! I´m going to describe me. I´m tall and thin...Hello! I´m going to describe me. I´m tall and thin. My hair is black and curly. My eyes are brown. I like wearing jeans or shorts and t-shirts. I love music.Cristina Pulidonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-10684546183601533862011-10-10T23:43:22.324+02:002011-10-10T23:43:22.324+02:00Perdona, Mª Jesús, con tanto comentario se me pasó...Perdona, Mª Jesús, con tanto comentario se me pasó comentar tu cuento de los cerditos: está fenomenal (el único fallo que veo - y es pequeño - es que creo que la palabra que quieres usar es "tit", no "teat" :)<br />Tu cuento, Andrea, no lo entiendo muy bien al acabar en puntos suspensivos; un par de cosillas: mira a ver dónde colocas los adjetivos (pretty & very happy) y, mejor, utiliza el pasado. Por lo demás, estupendo... y nos contarás qué significa ese final tan abierto :)<br />El tuyo, Nerea, muy chulo; como el que escribió antes Elena, deja mucho a la imaginación del lector, pero es muy coherente. Estupendo :)<br />Carlos, mejor este que le primero que enviaste: sólo un par de fallos, a ver si los encuentras tú. Primero, los verbos: elige un sólo tiempo para todos; el segundo "inglish" ¿eso qué es? :DPaco Gascónhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11161740958780459985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-49831380742448997652011-10-10T20:55:38.494+02:002011-10-10T20:55:38.494+02:00A little boy walked around park and watch a big ca...A little boy walked around park and watch a big castle.The castle is magic and speaks inglish.Carlosnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-40834430715316816242011-10-10T20:15:26.219+02:002011-10-10T20:15:26.219+02:00Profesor el primer comentario no es esque me he eq...Profesor el primer comentario no es esque me he equivocado,es el de las 20:13.¿Vale?Neerea Ruiznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-24414812879715839142011-10-10T20:13:47.382+02:002011-10-10T20:13:47.382+02:00"The worm ran and ran all the way home, but t..."The worm ran and ran all the way home, but then heard the same noise before ..."Neerea Ruiznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-50698360735170003862011-10-10T20:12:07.085+02:002011-10-10T20:12:07.085+02:00"The worm ran and ran all the way home, but t..."The worm ran and ran all the way home, but then I hear the same noise as before ..."Neerea Ruiznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-4550940582052965582011-10-10T16:58:15.221+02:002011-10-10T16:58:15.221+02:00¿Profe,mi cuento está bien?¿Profe,mi cuento está bien?María Jesús:)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-49357189957548518082011-10-10T16:56:25.138+02:002011-10-10T16:56:25.138+02:00A princess pretty & very happy lives in a cast...A princess pretty & very happy lives in a castle where all was very beautiful.Until one day all changed.The princess had it all planned & she managed well...Andrea 2ºAnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-45877965481408970122011-10-10T16:44:58.301+02:002011-10-10T16:44:58.301+02:00Elena, your last one is great... it might seem too...Elena, your last one is great... it might seem too obvious, but one could imagine one thousand different stories both before and after your sentence. Good one!Paco Gascónhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11161740958780459985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-6183753502347877692011-10-10T12:41:46.858+02:002011-10-10T12:41:46.858+02:00"He looked at the mountain behind, and there ..."He looked at the mountain behind, and there it was."Elena Lópeznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-26980666382625418832011-10-10T12:40:16.188+02:002011-10-10T12:40:16.188+02:00"When he woke up, the elephant was hungry.&qu..."When he woke up, the elephant was hungry."Elena Lópeznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-62450050562631111772011-10-10T09:17:27.580+02:002011-10-10T09:17:27.580+02:00Muy buenos los cuatro cuentos Irene, Marina (x2) y...Muy buenos los cuatro cuentos Irene, Marina (x2) y Sheila!! ¿Seguro que los habéis hecho vosotras solas? ;). Están muy bien, gracias por participar.<br />A mí me salen vuestras historias en inglés. Será que vosotras tenéis activada la traducción automática en vuestro navegador: decidles a vuestros padres que la quiten.Paco Gascónhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11161740958780459985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-76176108578577147182011-10-09T23:22:55.255+02:002011-10-09T23:22:55.255+02:00Profe,¿cómo lo ve?Profe,¿cómo lo ve?María Jesús:)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-75441960926965089902011-10-09T23:20:39.714+02:002011-10-09T23:20:39.714+02:00A sow had eight pigs that spent the day playing,th...A sow had eight pigs that spent the day playing,the problem arose when eating:the sow had six teat.Then its owner bought a baby's bottle & the problem was solved.María Jesús:)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-26057718709551301242011-10-09T18:14:43.807+02:002011-10-09T18:14:43.807+02:00A child was walking when it sees a magic apple. He...A child was walking when it sees a magic apple. He eats the apple and becomes invisible. The child scared very much. Finally everything was an evil dream.Sheilanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7486585715824006534.post-50323648300637731792011-10-09T17:47:19.510+02:002011-10-09T17:47:19.510+02:00A child is a house of chocolate. The house was enc...A child is a house of chocolate. The house was enchanted and the child transforms in a monster, remains in the house enclosed and later his sister comes and saves itmarinanoreply@blogger.com